English 10/24/14

 This week in English we learned about Revision. Monday's class we talked about revising our papers and I learned a few new ways of doing that and it helped me out a lot when I revised my papers that are due Monday. On Wednesday, we met one on one with Ms. Moses to talk about what she expected with the revisions. I learned from her as she told me to basically narrow my papers down. A couple of my papers themes were to bland and needed fixing and she told me how to do that and gave me ideas on how to narrow it down.